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Author Topic: Some typos in action description  (Read 602 times)
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TIM GERGEN
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« on: December 12, 2009, 11:44:35 am »

I think this is a wonderful idea. I hope that you are able to develop this site.
 
There are a couple of typos in the Action description dialogue box.

….”Example of Higher Action

Kipp caught himself against the wall, and raised the crowbar to chest level. Andrew rounded moments later, and Kipp struck out, aiming for his brother's shoulder. Bit his muscles where too weak to aim his blow correctly”…
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Breefield
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« Reply #1 on: December 21, 2009, 09:34:40 am »

Thanks a bunch for the interest and feedback Smiley
However, those typos are straight out of some books from the Project Gutenberg, so I don't think we'll be changing them per se. I'll bounce it off Aaron and see; maybe we'll just swap that paragraph with another.
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